Draft of Public Argument

Here's the link to my Rough Draft of Project 3

Reneman "DRAFT ICON" 2/24/13 via Wikipedia. Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported.

This is the strongest draft I've created yet. It is a research paper, so don't expect to read something super exciting. The hook is weak and the thesis is a bit wordy, but beyond that, the first three paragraphs are good in my opinion. I burned out near the end of the third paragraph so my last two paragraphs are short.