Draft of Open Letter

Here is the rough draft of my open letter.

Jefferson, Thomas "Declaration of Independence Draft" via Wikipedia. Public Domain.

I think I tried to tie in too many aspects of the semester into each paragraph and I didn't even try to split them up yet but let me know how you think I should split it up. Also let me know if I'm missing conventions of the genre. I looked at the conventions only briefly so I may have missed something.

I peer reviewed Ayra and Brandon's rough drafts.